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Talk about your future goal or plan

Talk about your future goal or plan 6aY80
I'm an ambitious person and I have numerous plans for my future. My primary goal is to become wealthy and intellectual. All the other tiny plans serve this ambition. I started to set this ambition five years ago at the generation I realize how essential money is in this life. Only if I had been born richer, I wouldn’t have been looked down on by my secondary school teacher. Similarly, only if I had had vast knowledge, my “dear” teacher could never bully me as she did. If everything happens as I intended, I will have reached my intention by the point I turn thirty or maybe thirty-five. Obviously, it will be a long journey, and also a huge challenge for me. On the beneficial side, this aspiration gave me a plethora ofmotivation. By this generation, I’ve hit a tiny part of my aim. I achieved enormous academic accomplishments, I went to Ha NOI and got cash from TV, etc. I’ve been the one that my teacher never thought I could be. Besides intellectual parts, I still need a long trip to become a wealthy person. First, I had a short-term goal which I will have graduated in the next three years. After graduating, I will find a job in a VFX company and work as a 3D animation creator. My immediate ambition is to earn 50. 000 dollars. By the next five or six years, when I get enough experience in this field (also a strong financial platform), I will have started my long-term goals. I intend to have joined the Institute of Archaeology as a 3D illustrator and my main job is restoring antiques in 3D models. I really hope that I will have had 100. 000 dollars in my bank account by the time I turn thirty. Generally, I received my motivation from my bad luck on the contrary, fortunately, when a door shut another open. In conclusion, maybe your previous body is not strong abundance, not have abundance power to get what you want on the contrary, it is not your present once. April showers bring May flowers.
I'm an ambitious person and I have numerous plans for my future. My primary goal is to become wealthy and intellectual. All the other tiny plans serve this ambition.

I
started
to set this ambition five years ago at the generation I realize how essential money is in this life.
Only
if I had
been born
richer, I wouldn’t have
been looked
down on by my secondary school teacher.
Similarly
,
only
if I had had vast knowledge, my “dear” teacher could never bully me as she did.

If everything happens as I intended, I will have reached my intention by the point I turn thirty or maybe thirty-five.
Obviously
, it will be a long journey, and
also
a huge challenge for me.

On the beneficial side, this aspiration gave me a plethora
ofmotivation
. By this generation, I’ve hit a tiny part of my aim. I achieved enormous academic accomplishments, I went to Ha NOI and
got
cash from TV, etc. I’ve been the one that my teacher never
thought
I could be.

Besides
intellectual parts, I
still
need a long trip to become a wealthy person.
First
, I had a short-term goal which I will have graduated in the
next
three years. After graduating, I will find a job in a VFX
company
and work as a 3D animation creator. My immediate ambition is to earn 50. 000 dollars. By the
next
five or six years, when I
get
enough
experience in this field (
also
a strong financial platform), I will have
started
my long-term goals. I intend to have
joined
the Institute of Archaeology as a 3D illustrator and my main job is restoring antiques in 3D models. I
really
hope that I will have had 100. 000 dollars in my bank account by the time I turn thirty.

Generally
, I received my motivation from my
bad
luck
on the contrary
,
fortunately
, when a door shut another open.

In conclusion
, maybe your previous body is not strong abundance, not have abundance power to
get
what you want
on the contrary
, it is not your present once. April showers bring May flowers.
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IELTS essay Talk about your future goal or plan

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
352 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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