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Describe an area of science that you are interested in (math, physics, etc.)

Describe an area of science that you are interested in (math, physics, etc. ) lLDgw
I am going to talk to you about psychology which is the brand of science I am fond of. If I remember correctly, my interest in it sparked 1 years ago. At the time, I was reading about how to read people’s minds, and I was impressed by it. The books taught me several fascinating tricks to understand what people think, behave when they have conservation with other people. From that, I started digging into psychology and realized it more interesting than I thought To broaden my horizons about psychology, I usually take leisure time to read books and watch Youtube videos about psychology on the internet. Moreover, I also engage in several clubs about it to discuss with people having the same hobby. There are various reasons why I am a big fan of psychology. Firstly, psychology helps me better understand myself. It significantly improves my emotion and communication. Secondly, psychology is one of the important aspects in my dream career, human resources. This is a job which has to meet and work with different types of people on a regular basis, so this ability can help me have a deeper understanding about the way people react and behave.
I am going to talk to you about
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psychology
which is the brand of science I am fond of.

If I remember
correctly
, my interest in it sparked 1 years ago. At the time, I was reading about how to read
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people’s
minds, and I
was impressed
by it. The books taught me several fascinating tricks to understand what
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people
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think
, behave when they have conservation with other
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people
. From that, I
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started
digging into
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psychology
and realized it more interesting than I
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thought


To broaden my horizons about
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psychology
, I
usually
take leisure time to read books and
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watch
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Youtube
videos about
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psychology
on the internet.
Moreover
, I
also
engage in several clubs about it to discuss with
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people
having the same hobby.

There are various reasons why I am a
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big
fan of
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psychology
.
Firstly
,
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psychology
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helps
me better understand myself. It
significantly
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improves
my emotion and communication.
Secondly
,
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psychology
is one of the
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important
aspects in my dream career, human resources. This is a job which
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has to
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meet
and work with
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different
types of
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people
on a regular basis,
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so
this ability can
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help
me have a deeper understanding about the way
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people
react and behave.
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IELTS essay Describe an area of science that you are interested in (math, physics, etc. )

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