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In this fast-paced lifestyle, it is almost impossible to take some rest let alone having some free time activities. But one activity which I like to do whenever I have some time to spare is to hang out with my friend. By that, I mean a whole lots of activities such as going window shopping, enjoy a cup of joe, Chow down at a fast-food joint, catch a flick, and even paint the town red! It totally depends on our mood. We don’t really plan anything, just go with the flow! But because of the Covid 19 we actually can’t do these things together and that’s quite boring. Of course we still find out some ways to deal with that like making video about us, do the BFF survey, edit some vlogs at home, … Hanging out with friends is on the top of my list because It’s a simple, practical and not an expensive activity to do. I’m able to have a chance to discharge all the negative feelings by sharing my stories, making jokes and talking about lots and lots of topics that we can think of about anything in this world. It’s great to have some friends who share a lot in common with me and is willing to support me mentally and financially too!
In this
fast
-paced lifestyle, it is almost impossible to take
some
rest
let
alone having
some
free time
activities
.
But
one
activity
which I like to do whenever I have
some
time to spare is to hang out with my friend.

By that, I mean a whole
lots
of
activities
such as going window shopping, enjoy a cup of
joe
, Chow down at a
fast
-food joint, catch a flick, and even paint the town red! It
totally
depends on our mood. We don’t
really
plan anything,
just
go with
the flow!
But
because
of the
Covid 19
we actually can’t do these things together and that’s quite boring. Of
course we
still
find out
some
ways to deal with that like making video about us, do the BFF survey, edit
some
vlogs at home, …

Hanging out with friends is on the top of my list
because
It’s a simple, practical and not an expensive
activity
to do. I’m able to have a chance to discharge all the
negative
feelings by sharing my stories, making jokes and talking about
lots
and
lots
of topics that we can
think
of about anything in this world. It’s great to have
some
friends who share a
lot
in common with me and is willing to support me mentally and
financially
too!
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IELTS essay Talk about your favourite free time activities

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
218 words
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