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Describe a recent dream you had.

Describe a recent dream you had. DoamA

I am going to write about my dream. firstly, I would like to mention that l am kind of person who is very sleepy. Moreover, when I have been very tired, I have had many experience of odd dreams. Last month, I had pretty strange dream when I was in deep sleep near morning. I was on the sky and I had two big wings that I held a tall stick in my hands. Also I could see my teacher that was running me with loud voice. Suddenly, I woke up sleep and I was very worried and frighted. Personaly, I think due to my task and exam that I did not accomplish, therefore, I had that dream. To sum up, I hope this kind of the dream will never became true because it annoys me.

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dream
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, I would like to mention that l am kind of person who is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 sleepy. Moreover
, when I have been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 tired, I have had Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: "much experience", "a good deal of experience".much experiencea good deal of experience
many experience
 of odd You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimaginationnightmaredelusionideathoughtfantasy
dreams
. Last month, I had pretty strange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimaginationnightmaredelusionideathoughtfantasy
dream
 when I was in deep sleep near morning. I was on the sky and I had two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 wings that I held a tall stick in my hands. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
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see
 my teacher that was running me with loud voice. Suddenly
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sleep and
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very
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Personaly
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 due to my task and exam that I did not accomplish, therefore
, I had that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimaginationnightmaredelusionideathoughtfantasy
dream
. To sum up, I hope this kind of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimaginationnightmaredelusionideathoughtfantasy
dream
 will never became true This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it annoys me. 