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what's your favorite movie theater?

what's your favorite movie theater? p1DRD
There are many good movie theaters in the world. But out of the cinemas I've been to, I like the CGV theater in GIGAMALL Thu Duc the most. First of all, the staff here are extremely good service, they are very friendly and attentive when dealing with customers. On top of that, The food here is very delicious and diverse, the popcorn has 4 flavors and the corn is always hot when it is served to the guests. Moreover, here also sells many other snacks besides popcorn, we just need to wait for a few minutes and the food will be available. Secondly, the sound and picture in the theater is extremely good, the screen is clear without blur, the sound is not timid and smooth for the viewers. Finally, There are many good movies in many genres such as romance, action, comedy, animation. But when I come here, I will often watch blockbuster movies, here will often be shown new blockbusters as quickly as possible, everything is great even about the movie's advertising cover. In conclusion, This is a movie theater I like very much, next to it there is also a video game area if you have to wait for that movie too long you can go there to play. I think if you can, try it next time.
There are
many
good
movie
theaters in the world.
But
out of the cinemas I've been to, I like the
CGV
theater
in
GIGAMALL
Thu
Duc
the most.
First of all
, the staff here are
extremely
good
service, they are
very
friendly and attentive when dealing with customers.
On top of that
, The food here is
very
delicious and diverse, the popcorn has 4 flavors and the corn is always hot when it
is served
to the guests.
Moreover
, here
also
sells
many
other snacks
besides
popcorn, we
just
need to wait for a few minutes and the food will be available.
Secondly
, the sound and picture in the
theater
is
extremely
good
, the screen is
clear
without blur, the sound is not timid and smooth for the viewers.
Finally
, There are
many
good
movies
in
many
genres such as romance, action, comedy, animation.
But
when I
come
here, I will
often
watch
blockbuster
movies
, here will
often
be shown
new blockbusters as
quickly
as possible, everything is great even about the movie's advertising cover.
In conclusion
, This is a
movie
theater
I like
very
much,
next
to it there is
also
a video game area if you
have to
wait for that
movie
too long you can go there to play. I
think
if you can, try it
next
time.
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IELTS essay what's your favorite movie theater?

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