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I am a student in Dao Duy Tu high school. In the future i wish to become a doctor. It's about saving people. I like to work in a room that is large enough and clean. I dislike like people who don't know how to take care of their children, people who jostle for goods because they just want to benefit themselves first. . and many more. My work is related to helping people, curing their diseases and helping them to feel better

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people
. I like to work in a room that is
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enough
 and clean. I dislike like You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who don't know how to take care of their children, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who jostle for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 want to benefit themselves first
. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 more. My work is related
 to helping You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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