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The two pictures show the comparison about the transformation of a trade conference in 2010 compared to 2009.

The two pictures show the comparison about the transformation of a trade conference in 2010 compared to 2009. gAEDl

The two pictures show the comparison about the transformation of a trade conference in 2010 compared to 2009. It is clear that while the top of the conference remained unchanged, it witnessed the radical changes in the main center area, with the noticeable replacement of meeting room and concert hall for exhibition space. After one year, the registration, the main and side entrance on the top had no changes in position, whereas, there was a new-build registration on the right-hand side. An additional lounge area was added to the balcony in 2010 as well. We can easily see considerable differences in the trade conference. The concert hall and meeting room were merged into one large room used for exhibiting reason. The concert hall including stage and less number of seats repositioned next to the balcony; however, its acreage was sharply decreased. Additionally, the meeting room and display area were demolished in the year 2010.

The two pictures This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 the comparison about the transformation of a trade conference in 2010 compared to 2009.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that while the top of the conference remained unchanged, it witnessed the radical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in the main center area, with the noticeable replacement of meeting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 and concert hall for exhibition space.

After one year, the registration, the main and side entrance on the top had no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in position, whereas, there was a new-build registration on the right-hand side. An additional lounge area was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the balcony in 2010 as well
.

We can easily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 considerable differences in the trade conference. The concert hall and meeting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
were merged
 into one large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for exhibiting reason. The concert hall including stage and less number of seats repositioned next
 to the balcony; however
, its acreage was sharply
 decreased. Additionally
, the meeting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 and display area were demolished
 in the year 2010. 