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Talk about your best friend

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One of the best parts of life is having someone you can count on. You can't imagine how much you'd miss that person or how lonely your life would become if they were gone. Friends are a great comfort, they are also an audience — your most valuable one at that. You have to impress them, to show them what a great person you are through the things you say and do. When it comes to my closest friend, off the top of my head, I would say it’s Kieu. To this day, I still remember vividly the first time we met was in grade 2. When I first met her, I thought she was a talkative and graceless girl. However, as I got to know her more, I realized that Kieu was a very loveable person and in fact we shared a lot in common. She is the same age as me. Now she studies in class 8a3. She lives with her grandparents and her aunt in My Thanh. Kieu is a little bit shorter than me, her height is 1 meter and 60 centimeters. She has long black hair and tanned skin. What I like most about her personality is that she has a great sense of humor. I mean she usually cracks me up with her jokes everytime we hang out together. We see eye to eye with each other about a lot of things such as study, sports, music, etc… Talking a little bit about her hobby, she likes playing badminton very much. And I do, too. We usually play it at our school on the weekend. I consider Kieu my best friend for a couple reasons. Firstly, she really respects me and loves me for who I am. Secondly, she always be there for me when I have a trouble.
One of the best parts of life is having someone you can count on. You can't imagine how much you'd miss that person or how lonely your life would become if they
were gone
. Friends are a great comfort, they are
also
an audience — your most valuable one at that. You
have to
impress them, to
show
them what a great person you are through the things you say and do. When it
comes
to my closest friend, off the top of my head, I would say it’s
Kieu
. To this day, I
still
remember
vividly
the
first
time we met was in grade 2. When I
first
met her, I
thought
she was a talkative and graceless girl.
However
, as I
got
to know her more, I realized that
Kieu
was a
very
loveable person and in fact we shared a lot in common.

She is the same age as me.
Now
she studies in
class
8a3. She
lives
with her grandparents and her aunt in My Thanh.
Kieu
is a
little bit
shorter than me, her height is 1 meter and 60 centimeters. She has long black hair and tanned skin. What I like most about her personality is that she has a great sense of humor. I mean she
usually
cracks me up with her jokes
everytime
we hang
out
together. We
see
eye to eye with each other about
a lot of
things such as study, sports, music, etc… Talking a
little bit
about her hobby, she likes playing badminton
very
much. And I do, too. We
usually
play it at our school on the weekend.

I consider
Kieu
my best friend for a
couple
reasons.
Firstly
, she
really
respects me and
loves
me for who I am.
Secondly
, she
always be
there for me when I have a trouble.
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IELTS essay Talk about your best friend

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
305 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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