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talk about your bedroom in your house

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For the past 21 years, I have lived in a house with my family. My humble home is in a small and quiet street, so coming home to me is like all the crazy things happening outside being left behind. Right next to my house there is a big old tree. I love my house and my favorite room in the house is my bedroom. My bedroom is on the second floor of my house and it is a fairly simple room with walls painted beige, a peaceful color. The fresh air outside. I usually open the window to enjoy the wind and sun, this will help cool my room when there is no air conditioner. Since I spend most of my time at home, my room means the whole world to me. It is like a friend who is always by my side, sharing the ups and downs with me. Everyone in this world has a favorite place. Some people tend to stay in their workplace and some like to spend time at restaurants, but I'm an introvert and I mostly enjoy spending time at my home. So I always miss home, miss my room whenever I'm absent. If you want me to talk about the room; I can say that my room is not what I imagined before, but the current room is quite satisfying for me. It has all the necessary things for a bedroom such as an air conditioner, bed, and wardrobe. The interior of the room was chosen by me and decorated in a very unique way. I liked my room but there are certain changes I would like to make in the room. Firstly, I was not satisfied with the size of the room's window. I wanted it bigger because I like big windows with white lace curtains. Another change that I want to make in my room is that I want to put some photos in the room, I love taking pictures so I want to leave my photos in the room. And the last thing I want to change in my room is adding a sofa along with a white carpet. The room would be more beautiful if there was a sofa and I could relax.
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behind. Right
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there is a
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tree. I
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my
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and my favorite
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in the
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is my bedroom. My bedroom is on the second floor of my
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and it is a
fairly
simple
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room
with walls painted beige, a peaceful color. The fresh air outside. I
usually
open the window to enjoy the wind and sun, this will
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help
cool my
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room
when there is no air conditioner. Since I spend most of my time at home, my
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room
means the whole world to me. It is like a friend who is always by my side, sharing the ups and downs with me. Everyone in this world has a favorite place.
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tend to stay in their workplace and
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I'm an introvert and I
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enjoy spending time at my home.
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So
I always miss home, miss my
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whenever I'm absent.

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me to talk about the
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; I can say that my
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is not what I imagined
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before
,
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the
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current
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is quite satisfying for me. It has all the necessary things for a bedroom such as an air conditioner, bed, and wardrobe. The interior of the
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room
was chosen
by me and decorated in a
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way.

I liked my
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changes
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.
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I like
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windows with white lace curtains. Another
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, I
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love
taking pictures
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I
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. And the last thing I
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change
in my
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is adding a sofa along with a white carpet. The
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would be more
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if there was a sofa and I could relax.
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IELTS essay talk about your bedroom in your house

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
374 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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