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Talk about you favorite Singer.

Talk about you favorite Singer. pRdJ0
Nowadays there are a lot of singers which are very famous and Tarsam Jasser is one of them who is very good singer as well as actor. l like him because of his thinking. He always solve his problems in a different way. He always sing motivation songs and his movies base on culture. l got a chance to meet him but l missed it because that time l was ill. But in future, if I will get a chance then definitely I will meet him.
Nowadays there are
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a lot of
singers which are
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very
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famous
and
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Tarsam
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Jasser
is one of them who is
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very
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good
singer
as well
as actor.
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l
like him
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because
of his thinking. He always
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solve
his problems in a
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different
way. He always
The pronoun 'He' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "sings", "sang".
sing
motivation songs and his movies base on culture.
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l
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got
a chance to
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meet
him
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but
l missed it
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because
that time l was ill.
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But
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
, if I will
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get
a chance then definitely I will
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meet
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IELTS essay Talk about you favorite Singer.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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