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Talk about the world changes in 15 years and talk about the ones that you like and dislike.

Talk about the world changes in 15 years and talk about the ones that you like and dislike. kxX3e
As the world is changing speedily, we can't know exactly anything in the future. However, we can still make a few predictions about it. Now, I'll tell you guys about my thought. Let's talk about the beneficial changes first. Firstly, in the future, we will have numerous modern studying ways. The more modern learning methods will be, the better it will enable us to have such a good education, which might increase the literacy rate. Secondly, it can be easily noticed that that the traffic in the world, especially here in Vietnam, is terrible. That's why scientists are developing flying cars. I guess, in the near future, traveling by flying cars won't be imaginary anymore. According to scientific reports, flying cars are faster, more convenient than ordinary cars. If they become one of the admissible means of transport, traffic jams is not a problem anymore. As the earth is having fewer and fewer fossil fuels, we will use more renewable energy. This type of energy can reduce pollution, which can put an end to climate change. I think we will know something about dark energy soon, and I hope it can replace fossil fuels. Fifthly, IT now is playing an essential role in the world. It is developing rapidly, promising to bring such some development in the Central Processing Unit developing technologies. Another benefit that technology can help us with is enabling us to build even stronger supercomputers. Another development in IT is quantum computing. It will become the future of technology because of its speed compared to bits. On the side of positive changes, there are still some negative ones. Firstly, we are now relying too much on technology. Also, humanity generally is overconfident and misguided that using computers will solve our problems. Technology may be super fast, but they can't solve troubles themselves. We know that relying on all-powerful science and technology too much may be counter-productive. Fifthly, although technological changes seem to be accelerating, political and social changes remain slow and have trouble keeping up. Hackers now have much better tools than before, and they can help some countries to attack others through the Internet, which can lead to an Internet Cold War. Also, the centralization of technologies may increase the chances of single points of failure and make the Internet weaker. In my view, I think I love and hate the improvement of technology because it brings us a better but somehow worse world. Above are all the changes that I think might happen in the future. In summary, The positive changes will solve some problems. But if the negative changes become real, they will make our life worse and worse.
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, we can't know exactly anything in the
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.
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a few predictions about it.
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you guys about my
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first
.
Firstly
, in the
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future
, we will have numerous modern studying ways. The more modern learning methods will be, the better it will enable us to have such a
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good
education, which might increase the literacy rate.
Secondly
, it can be
easily
noticed
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that that
the traffic in the
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world
,
especially
here in Vietnam, is terrible. That's why scientists are developing flying
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cars
. I guess, in the near
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future
, traveling by flying
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cars
won't be imaginary anymore. According to scientific reports, flying
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cars
are faster, more convenient than ordinary
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cars
. If they become one of the admissible means of transport, traffic jams is not a problem anymore. As the earth is having fewer and fewer fossil fuels, we will
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use
more renewable energy. This type of energy can
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reduce
pollution, which can put an
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end
to climate
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change
. I
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think
we will know something about dark energy
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soon
, and I hope it can replace fossil fuels.
Fifthly
, IT
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now
is playing an essential role in the
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world
. It is developing
rapidly
, promising to bring such
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some
development in the Central Processing Unit developing
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technologies
. Another benefit that
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technology
can
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help
us with is enabling us to build even stronger supercomputers. Another development in IT is quantum computing. It will become the
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future
of
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technology
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because
of its speed compared to bits. On the side of
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positive
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, there are
still
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some
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ones.
Firstly
, we are
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now
relying too much on
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technology
.
Also
, humanity
generally
is overconfident and misguided that using computers will solve our problems.
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Technology
may be super
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fast
,
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they can't solve troubles themselves. We know that relying on all-powerful science and
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technology
too much may be counter-productive.
Fifthly
, although technological
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changes
seem to be accelerating, political and social
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changes
remain slow and have trouble keeping up. Hackers
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now
have much better tools than
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before
, and they can
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help
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countries to attack others through the Internet, which can lead to an Internet
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Cold
War.
Also
, the centralization of
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technologies
may increase the chances of single points of failure and
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make
the Internet weaker. In my view, I
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I
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love
and hate the improvement of
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technology
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because
it brings us a better
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somehow worse
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world
. Above are all the
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changes
that I
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might happen in the
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future
. In summary, The
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positive
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changes
will solve
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if the
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become real, they will
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our life worse and worse.

IELTS essay Talk about the world changes in 15 years and talk about the ones that you like and dislike.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
445 words
6.0
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