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Childhood is the most fun and memorable time in anyone’s life. It’s the first stage of life which we enjoy in whatever way we like. Besides, this is the time that shapes up the future

Childhood is the most fun and memorable time in anyone’s life. It’s the first stage of life which we enjoy in whatever way we like. Besides, this is the time that shapes up the future 969O0
Since childhood, I had a dream to move to live abroad, as I did not feel at ease. In elementary school, I was the target of bullying, and in older school, I was a strange girl who wanted to jump over her head. So I got an idea in my head - traveling to find soulmates. With the support of my mother, I overcame my fears and began to form thoughts about moving and entering a magistracy step by step. That is why I am applying for the scholarship of Catholic University of Eichstätt-Ingolstadt School of Management to have an opportunity to gain experience in foreign methods of management in Germany, further develop the acquired competencies and successfully use them in the development of my country. I was chosen as an Erasmus + student for Skoda Auto University in Mlada Boleslav, Czech Republic in 2020. I have struggled to face Covid-19 there and I have been one of that small number of students who decided to stay despite risks. I have followed my wish to get as much experience and knowledge as I could. Also, I handled to live there two months more according to the impossibility to enter my own country. In addition, I decided to try one more program and applied for the German exchange program at the Catholic University of Eichstätt-Ingolstadt. Unfortunately, during the pandemic, no scholarships were available. However, I managed to find a local one from Bavarian Free State, which let me spend another semester abroad in 2021. I have always fought for my goals and worked in different places to secure my travels. In my first year, I got the experience of a waitress, both in Russia and abroad, which gave me the skill of communication, finding compromises. In my second year, I did an internship at the Autonomous nonprofit organization "Project office of the Development Strategy of the Nizhny Novgorod Region" which works with the local state. This period of work experience was extremely useful as it enabled me to deepen my understanding of management. It was an excellent opportunity to gain work experience in my chosen field and learn how to combine it with the study. Also, I worked in a data marketing company as an analyst in my 3rd year to make money for Germany (since the scholarship did not cover all expenses). Thanks to this experience, I gained willpower, patience, self-control, and the ability to motivate myself in those moments when I want to give up.
Since childhood, I had a dream to
move
to
live
abroad, as I did not feel at
ease
. In elementary school, I was the target of bullying, and in older school, I was a strange girl who wanted to jump over her head.
So
I
got
an
idea
in my head
-
traveling to find soulmates. With the support of my mother, I overcame my fears and began to form thoughts about moving and entering a magistracy step by step.
That is
why I am applying for the scholarship of Catholic University of
Eichstätt-Ingolstadt
School of Management to have an opportunity to gain
experience
in foreign methods of management in Germany,
further
develop the acquired competencies and
successfully
use
them in the development of my country.

I
was chosen
as an Erasmus + student for
Skoda
Auto University in
Mlada
Boleslav
, Czech Republic in 2020. I have struggled to face Covid-19 there and I have been one of that
small
number of students who decided to stay despite
risks
.
I
have followed my wish to
get
as much
experience
and knowledge as I could.
Also
, I handled to
live
there two months more according to the impossibility to enter my
own
country.
In addition
, I decided to try one more program and applied for the German exchange program at the Catholic University of
Eichstätt-Ingolstadt
. Unfortunately, during the pandemic, no scholarships were available.
However
, I managed to find a local one from Bavarian Free State, which
let
me spend another semester abroad in 2021.

I have always fought for my goals and worked in
different
places to secure my travels. In my
first
year, I
got
the
experience
of a waitress, both in Russia and abroad, which gave me the
skill
of communication, finding compromises. In my second year, I did an internship at the Autonomous nonprofit organization
"
Project office of the Development Strategy of the
Nizhny
Novgorod Region
"
which works with the local state. This period of work
experience
was
extremely
useful as it enabled me to deepen my understanding of management. It was an excellent opportunity to gain work
experience
in my chosen field and learn how to combine it with the study.
Also
, I worked in a data marketing
company
as an analyst in my 3rd year to
make
money for Germany (since the scholarship did not cover all expenses). Thanks to this
experience
, I gained willpower, patience, self-control, and the ability to motivate myself in those moments when I want to give up.
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IELTS essay Childhood is the most fun and memorable time in anyone’s life. It’s the first stage of life which we enjoy in whatever way we like. Besides, this is the time that shapes up the future

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