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Talk about the effects of inventions on people's lives.

Talk about the effects of inventions on people's lives. gxXXL
Every day, with the advancement of technology, we see new and practical inventions. Inventors make life easier for us every day. one of the most important inventions of humanity was the invention of the wheel, which accelerated our work, and other inventions include the invention of the telephone and the steam engine. one of the most important inventions of humanity was the invention of the wheel, accelerated work, and other inventions include the invention of the telephone and the steam engine. Additionally, inventions such as new tools devices and medicines, help us to live longer, healthier and more productive. And also they can help us to provide new ways of build, communicate, learn and something like that. On the contrary, some invention has harmful effects on human life such as the invention of TNT and weapons. Every year, these dangerous inventions cause the death of many people, and this is so sad. I hope that one day man will not use his inventions for war.
Every day, with the advancement of technology, we
see
new and practical inventions. Inventors
make
life easier for us every day.

one
of the most
important
inventions of humanity was the invention of the wheel, which accelerated our work, and other inventions include the invention of the telephone and the steam engine.
one
of the most
important
inventions of humanity was the invention of the wheel, accelerated work, and other inventions include the invention of the telephone and the steam engine.
Additionally
, inventions such as new tools devices and medicines,
help
us to
live
longer, healthier and more productive. And
also
they can
help
us to provide new ways of build, communicate, learn and something like that.
On the contrary
,
some
invention has harmful effects on human life such as the invention of TNT and weapons. Every year, these
dangerous
inventions cause the death of
many
people
, and this is
so
sad. I hope that one day
man
will not
use
his inventions for war.
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IELTS essay Talk about the effects of inventions on people's lives.

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