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Talk about the advantages and disadvantages of Internet.

Talk about the advantages and disadvantages of Internet. PXVgj

Good afternoon teacher! Today I’m going to talk about the mass media. Nowadays, there are different types of mass media, such as television programme, Internet, radio, newspaper. They are extremly useful for everyone. For example, The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. Because of COVID-19, all students have stay at home so they learn online through the internet. They are used to update latest news, relax by listening to music, watching films and reading books which I want. Beside a lot of advantages, it also has some disadvantages too. People who spend too much time to use the internet can harm health. It takes so much time to sit in front of the screen to play games. It affects to their health but it also decrease the amount of money which their parents earn by hard works. There fore, we should use it in the right way. At present living without Internet would be difficult.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
Good
 afternoon teacher!

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Today
 I’m going to talk about the mass media.

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different
 types of mass media, such as television Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.program
programme
, Internet, radio, newspaper. They are Possible spelling mistake found.extremely
extremly
 useful for everyone. For example
, The Internet is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
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used
 all around the world as a source of information and communication. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of COVID-19, all students have Use past participle here: "staid", "stayed".staidstayed
stay
 at home This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they learn online through the internet. They are In the grammatical structure 'pronoun + be/get + used + to + verb', the verb 'used' is used with the gerund: "used to updating".used to updating
used to update
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latest
 news, relax by listening to music, watching films and reading books which I want.

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a lot of
 advantages, it also
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some
 disadvantages too. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 who spend too much time to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the internet can harm health. It takes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much time to sit in front of the screen to play games. It affects to their health This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it also
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decrease
 the amount of money which their parents earn by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 works. This word is normally spelled as one.Therefore
There fore
, we should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it in the right way. At present living without Internet would be difficult. 