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It is thought by some that life is better in a city. Others, however, prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is thought by some that life is better in a city. Others, however, prefer to live in the countryside. 8J5Ql
Everyone has different thoughts between the countryside and the city. But in my opinion, every place has a good and a bad side. About the city, many people think that the city is the most livable place, and I also agree with that view due to the fact first in the city you will easily earn money from the big commercial centers, or the Big companies help you to earn huge amount of money. Secondly, in the city there are many fully-stocked shopping malls, making it easy for you to buy what you need. Finally, in the city there are many streets and vehicles to help you move more easily than in the countryside. Other hand, living in the countryside will be quieter than in the city because there is no noise of traffic and cases of traffic jams. Not only that, you can enjoy the beautiful scenery in the countryside that the city almost does not have such as rivers, mountains, ponds. The food in the countryside is fresh food, not industrial food, staying away from industrial foods will be better for your health. In conclusion, life in the city or the countryside has its positives and negatives, the choice of where to live is up to individual preferences. If it were me, I would choose to live in the city to invest in developing my career and life and return to my hometown when I am old and retired.
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people
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that the city is the most livable place, and I
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with that view due to the fact
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in the city you will
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earn money from the
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big
commercial centers, or the
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Big
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companies
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you to earn huge amount of money.
Secondly
, in the city there are
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fully
-stocked shopping malls, making it easy for you to
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buy
what you need.
Finally
, in the city there are
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many
streets and vehicles to
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help
you
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move
more
easily
than in the countryside.

Other hand, living in the
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countryside
will be quieter than in the city
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because
there is no noise of traffic and cases of traffic jams. Not
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only
that, you can enjoy the
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beautiful
scenery in the
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countryside
that the city almost does not have such as rivers, mountains, ponds. The
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food
in the
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countryside
is fresh
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food
, not industrial
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food
, staying away from industrial
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foods
will be better for your health.

In conclusion
, life in the city or the
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countryside
has its positives and negatives, the choice of where to
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live
is up to individual preferences. If it were me, I would choose to
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live
in the city to invest in developing my career and life and return to my hometown when I am
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old
and retired.
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IELTS essay It is thought by some that life is better in a city. Others, however, prefer to live in the countryside.

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