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disadvantages of free education

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On the other hand, there are also some advantages related to free college education. First, students might not focus on class lectures. This is because students do not have to pay money for attending classes, taking and even re-taking exams, therefore they do not appreciate and put effort in studying. Besides that, more students participate in classes, so many educational systems in some places will be overwhelmed.

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IELTS essay disadvantages of free education

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American English

1 paragraphs

67 words

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