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Talk about some technology that you have started using fairly recently

Talk about some technology that you have started using fairly recently NWr2g
I would like speak about the last technology that I have started using fairly recently that is a robotic vacuum cleaner that I bought this two months ago from the online shop. At first, I had been bought an ordinary vacuum cleaner 2 years ago. However, I wanted the more evolved robotic vacuum and it's very helpful to me and Incredibly efficient. The benefits are enormous. I am able to save my time, energy and money and I can spend my time doing another task when the dear robotic vacuum cleans the house In the blink of an eye. Lastly, I will still be using a robotic vacuum until many years later, so life is a lot better now that I have it. since I don’t have to take help another person or maid. I am also able to maintain my energy and good health. Fortunately, it's a fact that the growth of technology has accelerated in recent years, and this greatly contributes to the progress of life and living more comfortably.
I would like speak about the last technology that I have
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robotic
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vacuum
cleaner that I
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bought
this two months ago from the online shop. At
first
, I had been
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bought
an ordinary
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vacuum
cleaner 2 years ago.

However
, I wanted the more evolved
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robotic
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vacuum
and it's
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very
helpful to me and
Incredibly
efficient. The benefits are enormous. I am able to save my time, energy and money and I can spend my time doing another task when the dear
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robotic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacuum
cleans the
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house
In the blink of an eye.

Lastly
, I will
still
be using a
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robotic
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vacuum
until
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many
years later,
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so
life is a lot better
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now
that I have it. since I don’t
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have to
take
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help
another person or maid. I am
also
able to maintain my energy and
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good
health.

Fortunately
, it's a fact that the growth of technology has accelerated in recent years, and this
greatly
contributes to the progress of life and living more
comfortably
.

IELTS essay Talk about some technology that you have started using fairly recently

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
172 words
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