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the reasons why people don't do sports.

the reasons why people don't do sports. DalyE
In my opinion, who people don't exercise have many reasons to Justification it. like a short time, busy life, As well as not having enough time to rest and gain energy and be with family and children. In the mechanical life of this time, there may be main and real reasons, and for some people, it is just a justification for his laziness. However, people's lifestyles and concerns and priorities are different from each other, and I hope everyone has a happy and healthy life.
In my opinion, who
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people
don't exercise have
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many
reasons to Justification it. like a short time, busy life,
As well
as not having
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enough
time to rest and gain energy and be with family and children.

In the mechanical life of this time, there may be main and real reasons, and for
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some
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people
, it is
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just
a justification for his laziness.
However
,
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people
's lifestyles and concerns and priorities are
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different
from each other, and I hope everyone has a happy and healthy life.

IELTS essay the reasons why people don't do sports.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
85 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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