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Some people believe that human is the main culprit for increasing pollution. Other says that there are other measurable fact too. Explain your opinion and valid information

Some people believe that human is the main culprit for increasing pollution. Other says that there are other measurable fact too. Explain your opinion and valid information 1m52A
Pollution is a term which even kids are aware of these days. It has become so common that almost everyone acknowledges the fact that pollution is rising continuously. The term ‘pollution’ means the manifestation of any unsolicited foreign substance in something. When we talk about pollution on earth, we refer to the contamination that is happening of the natural resources by various pollutants. All this is mainly caused by human activities which harm the environment in ways more than one. Therefore, an urgent need has arisen to tackle this issue straightaway. That is to say, pollution is damaging our earth severely and we need to realize its effects and prevent this damage. In this essay on pollution, we will see what are the effects of pollution and how to reduce it. Pollution affects the quality of life more than one can imagine. It works in mysterious ways, sometimes which cannot be seen by the naked eye. However, it is very much present in the environment. For instance, you might not be able to see the natural gases present in the air, but they are still there. Similarly, the pollutants which are messing up the air and increasing the levels of carbon dioxide is very dangerous for humans. Increased level of carbon dioxide will lead to global warming. Further, the water is polluted in the name of industrial development, religious practices and more will cause a shortage of drinking water. Without water, human life is not possible. Moreover, the way waste is dumped on the land eventually ends up in the soil and turns toxic. If land pollution keeps on happening at this rate, we won’t have fertile soil to grow our crops on. Therefore, serious measures must be taken to reduce pollution to the core. After learning the harmful effects of pollution, one must get on the task of preventing or reducing pollution as soon as possible. To reduce air pollution, people should take public transport or carpool to reduce vehicular smoke. While it may be hard, avoiding firecrackers at festivals and celebrations can also cut down on air and noise pollution. Above all, we must adopt the habit of recycling. All the used plastic ends up in the oceans and land, which pollutes them.
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Pollution
is a term which even kids are aware of these days. It has become
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so
common that almost everyone acknowledges the fact that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pollution
is rising
continuously
. The term
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
‘pollution’
means the manifestation of any unsolicited foreign substance in something. When we talk about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pollution
on earth, we refer to the contamination
that is
happening of the natural resources by various pollutants. All this is
mainly
caused by human activities which harm the environment in ways more than one.
Therefore
, an urgent need has arisen to tackle this issue straightaway.
That is
to say,
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pollution
is damaging our earth
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severely and
we need to realize its effects and
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prevent
this damage. In this essay on
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pollution
, we will
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see
what are the effects of
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pollution
and how to
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reduce
it.
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Pollution
affects the quality of life more than one can imagine. It works in mysterious ways,
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sometimes
which cannot be
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seen
by the naked eye.
However
, it is
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very
much present in the environment.
For instance
, you might not be able to
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see
the natural gases present in the
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air
,
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but
they are
still
there.
Similarly
, the pollutants which are messing up the
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air
and increasing the levels of carbon dioxide is
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very
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dangerous
for humans. Increased level of carbon dioxide will lead to global warming.

Further
, the water
is polluted
in the name of industrial development, religious practices and more will cause a shortage of drinking water. Without water, human life is not possible.
Moreover
, the way waste
is dumped
on the land
eventually
ends up in the soil and turns toxic. If land
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pollution
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keeps
on happening at this rate, we won’t have fertile soil to grow our crops on.
Therefore
, serious measures
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must
be taken
to
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reduce
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pollution
to the core.

After learning the harmful effects of
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pollution
, one
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must
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get
on the task of preventing or reducing
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pollution
as
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soon
as possible. To
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reduce
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air
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pollution
,
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people
should take public transport or carpool to
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reduce
vehicular smoke. While it may be
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hard
, avoiding firecrackers at festivals and celebrations can
also
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cut
down on
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air
and noise
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pollution
.
Above all
, we
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must
adopt the habit of recycling. All the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
plastic ends up in the oceans and land, which pollutes them.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that human is the main culprit for increasing pollution. Other says that there are other measurable fact too. Explain your opinion and valid information

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