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The sea it’s the most important in the life we eat from it fishs and have going to it with friends and family having parpeku, play football actuall i love going there look for it and have long preth win i feel sadnees. The sea have alot of fishs and anemils in it put a lot of humen kill them, throw the waste all of this make it contaminated, doesn’t look beutfull. Swmming it’s the most work out you can do it in it and skopadiving, in amerca the parents train children to swmming. Put a lot of pepule don’t like the sea because have problem with it. In my opinion i love the sea i lik going to it and have a nice time with my frinds like eat launch play or do anything on it in the end I want to say please let this see cleaning
The
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important
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fishs
and have going to it with friends and family having
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parpeku
, play football
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actuall
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i
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going there look for it and have long
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preth
win
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i
feel
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sadnees
.

The
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sea
have
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alot
of
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fishs
and
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anemils
in it put
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a lot of
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humen
kill them, throw the waste all of this
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make
it contaminated, doesn’t look
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beutfull
.

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Swmming
it’s the most work out you can do it in it and
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skopadiving
, in
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amerca
the parents train children to
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swmming
.

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pepule
don’t like the
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have problem with it.

In my opinion
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i
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love
the
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i
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lik
going to it and have a nice time with my
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frinds
like eat launch play or do anything on it in the
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end
I want to say
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cleaning

IELTS essay talk about other life ocean and sea

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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