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Talk about one of your favorite books

Talk about one of your favorite books 5aV8p
I supposed that each of us has heard about Nguyen Nhat Anh at least once before. He is a very famous writer who writes for children but people of all ages love his books. I first read NNA’s book when I was in grade 6 and my first book was “Có 2 con mèo ngồi bên cửa sổ”. It is a very lovely and pure story about the love between 2 cats and a friendship between a cat and a mouse. Mouse and cat are nature enemy but they become very close friends in this story when a male cat named Gấu begin to fall in love with a female cat named Áo Hoa and two mice named Tí Hon and Út Hoa help Gấu win Áo Hoa’s heart. The thing I really like about this book is that it demonstrates love and friendship in an adorable way through animals so that it makes the story very light and relaxing to read. After all, it is a great book and I definitely recommend it for those who are looking for something cute and entertaining to read.
I supposed that each of us has heard about Nguyen
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Nhat
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Anh at
least once
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before
. He is a
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very
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famous
writer who writes for children
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but
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people
of all ages
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love
his
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books
. I
first
read
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NNA
’s
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book
when I was in grade 6 and my
first
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book
was “
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Có
2 con
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mèo
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ngồi
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bên
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cửa
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sổ
”. It is a
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very
lovely and pure story about the
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love
between 2 cats and a friendship between a cat and a mouse. Mouse and cat are nature enemy
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but
they become
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very
close friends in this story when a male cat named
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Gấu
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begin
to fall in
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love
with a female cat named
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Áo
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Hoa
and two mice named
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Tí
Hon and
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Út
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Hoa
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help
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Gấu
win
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Áo
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Hoa
’s heart. The thing I
really
like about this
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book
is that it demonstrates
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love
and friendship
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in an adorable way
through animals
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so
that it
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makes
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very
light and relaxing to read.
After all
, it is a great
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book
and I definitely recommend it for those who are looking for something cute and entertaining to read.
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IELTS essay Talk about one of your favorite books

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
186 words
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