In recent eras, aging has become a concern with people all around the world. Some
individuals are willing to continue their job even after having reached their retirement
age. While there are several drawbacks of this aspect, I believe that its benefits are
outweight those detrimental effects.
On the one hand, continuing to work despite having reached retirement age has some
adverse consequences on elderly. From general perspective, this phenomenon can lead to an undesirably more competitive employment market. For instance, elderly
candidates, who have more hands-on experience, compete with younger one for their
position of employment can lead to the age discrimination in one organisation. If a
considerable number of works are taken accountibilty by the seniors, there will be
fewer opportuinities for young generation who want to have stayable job and chance to make advance in working. As a result, numerous of youngster must leave off their job.
However, in spite of the drawbacks, the advantages of the allowing elderly people to
continue their career should be noticeable. From individuals level, continuing to work
after their limited age is an appropriate opportunity for elderly to improve their mental
health and prevent from disease. To be specific, working can help their brains active
positively so that they can prevent from some problems relevant to brain disorders
such as Alzhiemer, which can lead to a better retire life. For family’s benefit, elderly
can make a contribution to family’s finance, which decrease the heavy of finance
burden for their kids. This typicial situation has become familiar with some family in
developing countries such as Vietnam, where kids depend on their parental support in
money to work or caring their children.
In conclusion, although this phenomenon may bring pressure on working
environment, it has beneficial consequences for both individuals and their family in
some situation. 
In recent eras, aging has become a concern with  
people
 all around the world.  
Some
individuals are willing to continue their job even after having reached their retirement
age. While there are several drawbacks of this aspect, I believe that its benefits are 
outweight
 those detrimental effects.
On the one hand, continuing to work despite having reached retirement age has  
some
adverse consequences on elderly. From general perspective, this phenomenon can lead to an  
undesirably
 more competitive employment market.  
For instance
, elderly
candidates, who have more hands-on experience, compete with younger one for their
position of employment can lead to the age discrimination in one  
organisation
. If a
considerable number of works  
are taken
  accountibilty
 by the seniors, there will be
fewer  
opportuinities
 for young generation who want to have  
stayable
 job and chance to  
make
 advance in working.  
As a result
, numerous of youngster  
must
  leave
 off their job. 
However
,  
in spite of
 the drawbacks, the advantages of the allowing elderly  
people
 to
continue their career should be noticeable. From individuals level, continuing to work
after their limited age is an appropriate opportunity for elderly to  
improve
 their mental
health and  
prevent
 from disease. To be specific, working can  
help
 their brains active 
positively
  so
 that they can  
prevent
 from  
some
 problems relevant to brain disorders
such as  
Alzhiemer
, which can lead to a better retire life. For  
family’s
 benefit, elderly
can  
make
 a contribution to  
family’s
 finance, which decrease the heavy of finance
burden for their kids. This  
typicial
 situation has become familiar with  
some
  family
 in 
developing countries
 such as Vietnam, where kids depend on their parental support in
money to work or caring their children. 
In conclusion
, although this phenomenon may bring pressure on working
environment, it has beneficial consequences for both individuals and their  
family
 in 
some
 situation.