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Talk about divorce in your country

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Unfortuanility, these days the rate of divorce is increasing dramatically. The predominant reasons are lack of understanding, lack of sex appeal, joblessness, addiction, infidelity, they have little patience I mean they are not compatible with each other and inference of other family members. Also, before age of seven mother is a custodian but after the child is given to his father up to the age of 18, and after that he is free. If a father is not qualified the support the child the court can decide whether to give custody to the father or not

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IELTS essay Talk about divorce in your country

Essay

American English

2 paragraphs

95 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.5

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