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Excercise is important for everyones health do you agree or disagree.

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Exercise provides fit as well without diseases body. It plays paramount role in humans life. I agree with this statement and I will discuss my point in below sections. To commence with, there are numerous benefits for doing exercise daily. First and foremost point is control weight. Exercise is helpful for alleviate the weight of body due to the fact of some people are extremely heavy but if they doing exercises in regular basis it will beneficial for reducing their weight.
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IELTS essay Excercise is important for everyones health

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
81 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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