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Talk about caravan for project

Talk about caravan for project Ql9mX
Caravan tourisms are really popular now, you know it? It is understood as a form of travel by self-driving cars or personal vehicles in groups of two or more people by road, which can go through different territories and countries. Caravan tourism has a high level of comfort and flexibility, helping visitors not only satisfy the need to test their driving skills on beautiful roads but also have the freedom to explore and experience nature and culture in destinations. arrived on the way. Self-driving means that tourists are in control of the journey, can stop to take pictures, rest or camp in their favorite destinations, participate in festivals or learn about the cultural life of people, the land we go through, creating unforgettable impressions and memories. Although, it's a special transportation so maybe, it's quite expensive. There won, t be room for toilet or shower so we would need to use the campsite facilities. Caravan is made from metal like steel, rubber, etc. It's spacious and have lots of fruit here, i think it quite good for my health. I want to put it in the forest because it's will be natural here, i can use caravan to move anywhere in a forest to see animal there and also, it's really cool here. Maybe, if you want, you can have some campings here! Top reasons: - Best place to go camping- It have clean air and cool weather with green and fresh, natural view. - It's comfortable and flexibility. - Don't be very noisy. - I can eat strange fruit and drink water from a river. - I can move to anywhere in a forest to have a sight seeing.
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Caravan
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tourisms
are
really
popular
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now
, you know it?

It
is understood
as a form of travel by self-driving cars or personal vehicles in groups of two or more
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people
by road, which can go through
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different
territories and countries.
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Caravan
tourism has a high level of comfort and flexibility, helping visitors not
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only
satisfy the need to
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test
their driving
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skills
on
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beautiful
roads
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but
also
have the freedom to explore and experience nature and culture in destinations.
The usual proposition after "arrived" is "at" not "on". Did you mean "arrived at"?
arrived on
the way. Self-driving means that tourists are in control of the journey, can
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stop
to take pictures, rest or camp in their favorite destinations, participate in festivals or learn about the cultural life of
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people
, the land we go through, creating unforgettable impressions and memories. Although,
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it's
a special transportation
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so
maybe,
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it's
quite expensive. There
Did you mean "won't" or "won’t"?
won, t
be room for toilet or shower
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so
we would need to
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use
the campsite facilities.
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Caravan
is made
from metal like steel, rubber, etc.
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It's
spacious and have lots of fruit here,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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think
it quite
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good
for my health. I want to put it in the forest
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because
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it's
will be natural here,
Did you mean "I"?
i
can
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use
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caravan
to
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move
anywhere in a forest to
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see
animal there and
also
,
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it's
really
cool here. Maybe, if you want, you can have
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some
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campings
here! Top reasons:
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-
Best place to go camping- It
Did you mean "has"?
have
clean air and cool weather with green and fresh, natural view.
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-
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It's
comfortable and flexibility.
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-
Don't be
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very
noisy.
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-
I can eat strange fruit and drink water from a river.
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-
I can
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move
to anywhere in a forest to have a sight seeing.
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IELTS essay Talk about caravan for project

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
280 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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