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Rich countries help poor countries financially, to eliminate poverty; but this is not working well

Rich countries help poor countries financially, to eliminate poverty; but this is not working well 0w8X9
Rich countries help poor countries financially, to eliminate poverty; but this is not working well"- I may agree to this statement. Since rich countries like Swizerland can help poor countries like Madagarscar, but it cannot be fully satisfied to eradicate proverty. Maybe rich countries might have higher GDP compared to poor countries. There are many factors affecting to eliminate poverty. The primary problem for any poor country is lack of good education. If children of this generation ahs good and standard education, they might improve thier society and their country a better one. Then the poverty in their country will reduce gradually. In most of the poor countries, man labour will be higher compared to machine labour. The people who work for man labour will get daily wages and it will spent on that day itself. This is another important step to eliminate poverty. To develop any country, the country must have higher margin with export goods. If goods and products are been sold to another country, automatically the income of the country will increase.
Rich
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help
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poor
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countries
financially
, to eliminate poverty;
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but
this is not working well
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- I may
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like
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Swizerland
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help
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poor
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countries
like
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Madagarscar
,
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it cannot be
fully
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proverty
. Maybe rich
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countries
might have higher GDP compared to
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poor
countries.

There are
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many
factors affecting to eliminate poverty. The primary problem for any
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poor
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country
is lack of
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good
education. If children of this generation
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ahs
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good
and standard education, they might
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improve
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thier
society and their
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country
a better one. Then the poverty in their
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country
will
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reduce
gradually
.

In most of the
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poor
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countries
,
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man
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labour
will be higher compared to machine
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labour
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people
who work for
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man
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labour
will
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get
daily wages and it will
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spent
on that day itself. This is another
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important
step to eliminate poverty.

To develop any
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country
, the
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country
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must
have higher margin with export
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goods
. If
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goods
and products
are been
sold to another
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country
,
automatically
the income of the
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country
will increase.
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IELTS essay Rich countries help poor countries financially, to eliminate poverty; but this is not working well

Essay
  American English
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175 words
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