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I think my favorite would be a dog. A dog is a domesticated animal that can be commonly seen in almost all houses in my country. Being a dog is a great keeper and it shows unconditional love for its owner. Interestingly, the characteristics of dogs depend on their breed. For example, there are dogs that will be gentle, friendly with strangers, there are also aggressive breeds, hunting dogs trained in a military environment. Even more, the food requirements vary with breed. One needs to know the breed of the dog and provide the food accordingly. A dog surely becomes a part of the family and often it has been seen that they get weak in the absence of their owners. The connection between dogs and humans is almost electric and I believe one must surely have one.
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is a domesticated animal that can be
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in almost all
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in my country. Being a
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dog
is a great keeper and it
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unconditional
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for its owner.
Interestingly
, the characteristics of
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dogs
depend on their
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breed
.
For example
, there are
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dogs
that will be gentle, friendly with strangers, there are
also
aggressive
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breeds
, hunting
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dogs
trained in a military environment. Even more, the food requirements vary with
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breed
. One needs to know the
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breed
of the
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dog
and provide the food
accordingly
. A
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dog
surely
becomes a part of the family and
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it has been
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seen
that they
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get
weak in the absence of their owners. The
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connection between
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dogs
and humans is almost electric and I believe one
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surely
have one.
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IELTS essay Talk about an animal you like

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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