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I have purchased a number of technology products, and most significantly, my laptop. It's Gaming G5, which can be considered a masterpiece of DELL. This laptop has an exorbitantly high price and is only suitable for the well-off people. However, I was bought by my aunt when I graduated from college. You know, I was mesmerized by its uniquely designed look at first sight, that's why. This is a very important piece of technology to me, as it is the most expensive gift I have ever received. It also helps me a lot in studying, relaxing, keeping in touch with other family members and finding information on the internet. That's why I think this laptop is so important.
I have
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purchased
a number of technology products, and most
significantly
, my laptop. It's Gaming G5, which can
be considered
a masterpiece of DELL. This laptop has an
exorbitantly
high price and is
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only
suitable for the well-off
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people
.
However
, I was
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bought
by my aunt when I graduated from college. You know, I
was mesmerized
by its
uniquely
designed look at
first
sight, that's why. This is a
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very
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important
piece of technology to me, as it is the most expensive gift I have ever received. It
also
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helps
me a lot in studying, relaxing, keeping in touch with other family members and finding information on the internet. That's why I
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think
this laptop is
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so
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important
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IELTS essay speak about technology important for you

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
118 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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