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Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social, and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressure, what measures should be taken to tackle this problem ?

Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social, and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressure, what measures should be taken to tackle this problem? BWAGj
One of the most topical issues in mordern society is that Children are pressurized and facing harder academic, social and commercial challenges. While there are many factors which lead to this, there are also ways to overcome this problem. This essay will outline the reason why children are facing educational, social and commercial perspectives, and explore some potential solutions to this issue.
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society is that Children
are pressurized
and facing harder academic, social and commercial challenges. While there are
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many
factors which lead to this, there are
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ways to overcome this problem. This essay will outline the reason why children are facing educational, social and commercial perspectives, and explore
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potential solutions to this issue.

IELTS essay Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social, and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressure, what measures should be taken to tackle this problem?

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1 paragraphs
62 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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