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plan shows site of an airport now and after one year redevelopment

plan shows site of an airport now and after one year redevelopment kjGwd

The plan displays the Southwest Airport now and after one year redevelopment. Overall, it is evident that the boarding gates have been increased and number of new facilities are modernized for the convenience of departing and arriving passengers. Firstly, departure entrance is seen from the front of the building which is to the left, once passed it there are security and passport control right in the front, before that a bag drop area is happen to be introducing by moving the check-in section to the other side in the departing hall. In addition, a cafe is to be added just at the entrance. Passed the security, are the shops which are not currently not present. Subsequently, a concourse is seen with a moving walkway to reach the boarding gates, however, next year the concourse area is expanded with 10 more gates and walkway being replaced with sky train. On the other hand, arrival hall currently possess customs and passport control, it is modernized with few facilities coming like a cafe, ATM and car hire for the convenience of the passengers arriving clearing through the customs.

The plan displays the Southwest Airport This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 and after one year redevelopment.

Overall
, it is evident that the boarding gates have been increased
 and number of new facilities are modernized
 for the convenience of departing and arriving passengers.

Firstly
, departure entrance is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from the front of the building which is to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
, once passed it there Did you mean "is"?is
are
 security and passport control right in the front, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 that a bag drop area is Consider using a past participle here: "happened".happened
happen
 to be introducing by moving the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
-in section to the other side in the departing hall. In addition
, a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 is to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 at the entrance. Passed the security, are the shops which are not currently
 not present. Subsequently
, a concourse is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 with a moving walkway to reach the boarding gates, however
, next
 year the concourse area is expanded
 with 10 more gates and walkway being replaced
 with sky train.

On the other hand
, arrival hall currently
 possess customs and passport control, it is modernized
 with few facilities coming like a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
, ATM and car hire for the convenience of the passengers arriving clearing through the customs. 