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Describe about the thing you don’t forget

Describe about the thing you don’t forget 5BlQQ
Each of us will have a lot of things that me feel don’t forget, but in my opinion i think my debit card, which is so important to me. About four years ago when I got my first job, my company required all employees to have a bank account. There were so many banks, and I had no idea which bank was better. My father had a bank account at Sacombank, so I decided to open an account at there First, it’s much more convenient to bring a card with you instead of cash. If you pay by card, you don’t need to wait for change or prepare change in advance. In addition, with a debit card, you can shop online instead of going to physical stores. Now, with internet banking or a mobile banking account, you can stay at home and shop online for anything you want, which is so convenient and time-saving. Third, in Vietnam, it’s not really safe to carry a large amount of cash around with you. You are at a greater risk of losing your money by pick-pockets or robbers. So, it’s much safer to bring a card. If you need cash, you can easily take out how much you need from an ATM. Now, I bring my card with me everywhere I go. After using it for a while, I learned how to manage my budget more effectively and how to keep track of all the money I spend in a week or month. In conclusion if i had to decribe about the thing i don’t forget, i will describe about my debit card
Each of us will have
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things that me feel don’t forget,
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in my opinion
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think
my debit
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card
, which is
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so
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important
to me.

About four years ago when I
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got
my
first
job, my
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company
required all employees to have a
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bank
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account
. There were
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so
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many
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banks
, and I had no
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idea
which
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bank
was better. My father had a
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bank
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account
at
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Sacombank
,
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so
I decided to open an
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account
at
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First
, it’s much more convenient to bring a
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card
with you
instead
of cash. If you pay by
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card
, you don’t need to wait for
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change
or prepare
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change
in advance.
In addition
, with a debit
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card
, you can shop online
instead
of going to physical stores.
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Now
, with internet banking or a mobile banking
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account
, you can stay at home and shop online for anything you want, which is
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so
convenient and time-saving.

Third, in Vietnam, it’s not
really
safe to carry a large amount of cash around with you. You are at a greater
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risk
of losing your money by pick-pockets or robbers.
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So
, it’s much safer to bring a
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card
. If you need cash, you can
easily
take out how much you need from an ATM.

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Now
, I bring my
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card
with me everywhere I go. After using it for a while, I learned how to manage my budget more
effectively
and how to
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keep
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track
of all the money I spend in a week or month.

In conclusion
if
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i
had to
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decribe
about the thing
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i
don’t forget,
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about my debit
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IELTS essay Describe about the thing you don’t forget

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
269 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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