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Talk about a place you like to go and why this place is special to you. Include details in your response. v.1

Talk about a place you like to go and why this place is special to you. Include details in your response. v. 1
Communication plays a vital role in our life. I absolutely agree that communication skill aid us to interact with people properly and get people do almost whatever you want. In this essay, I will discuss several methods to convince people from my own experience. First of all, if you are going to ask for favours from someone you have never met, try to develop a relationship before asking it directly. Start with a normal conversation and try to interact with that person one on one. It gives you the opportunity to get to know who you are really talking to. Instead of listening others most people tend to talk more about themselves. Thus take the advantage of it by letting them talk and find out what they need. Listening projects that you are interested in them and it strengthens the relationship. Basically, you can kill two birds with one stone. And then try to help giving them what they need, whenever you have a chance. Once you supply their need, people are bound to return the favour as well. Since you helped them, talk about your difficult issues in which you need their help or support. You are by implication asking them to do something for you. Secondly, being reliable is a key way to gain trust. Be the person who can hold yourself accountable for your own action. Also dont underrate the importance of showing your confidence and demonstrate your value. Therefore cut the words that might sound, you less confident from the outset of the conversation. You can't only persuade someone by your confidential speech if you cannot show it with your body language. Body language projects your confidence for instance: keep your shoulders back, make an eye contact and stop fidgeting. In this method, it is important for fuse both confidence and urgency into your conversation. Creating urgency overwhelms the opportunity to think about different aspects and make them confused. Now it is the perfect time for your trustworthy character trait to come into play. There are likely to give you the benefits of the doubt. In conclusion, it is apparent that more you skilled in communicating the more you can get someone on your side. If the aforementioned steps are taken the overwhelming majority of people will be persuaded without even knowing it.
Communication plays a vital role in our life. I
absolutely
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agree
that communication
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skill
aid us to interact with
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people
properly
and
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get
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people
do almost whatever you want. In this essay, I will discuss several methods to convince
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people
from my
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own
experience.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, if you are going to
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ask for
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favours
from someone you have never met, try to develop a relationship
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before
asking it
directly
.
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Start
with a normal conversation and try to interact with that person one on one. It gives you the opportunity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
to know who you are
really
talking to.
Instead
of listening others most
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people
tend to talk more about themselves.
Thus
take the advantage of it by letting them talk and find out what they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
. Listening projects that you
are interested
in them and it strengthens the relationship.
Basically
, you can kill two birds with one stone. And then try to
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help
The verb 'help' is used with an infinitive: "to give" or "give".
giving
them what they
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need
, whenever you have a chance. Once you supply their
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need
,
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people
are bound
to return the
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favour
as well
. Since you
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helped
them, talk about your difficult issues in which you
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need
their
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help
or support. You are by implication asking them to do something for you.

Secondly
, being reliable is a key way to gain trust. Be the person who can hold yourself accountable for your
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own
action.
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Also
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dont
underrate the importance of showing your confidence and demonstrate your value.
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Therefore
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cut
the words that might sound, you less confident from the outset of the conversation. You can't
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only
persuade someone by your confidential speech if you cannot
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show
it with your body language. Body language projects your confidence
for instance
:
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keep
your shoulders back,
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make
an eye contact and
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stop
fidgeting. In this method, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for fuse both confidence and urgency into your conversation. Creating urgency overwhelms the opportunity to
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think
about
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different
aspects and
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make
them confused.
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Now
it is the perfect time for your trustworthy character trait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
into play. There are likely to give you the benefits of the doubt.

In conclusion
, it is apparent that more you skilled in communicating the more you can
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get
someone on your side.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
the aforementioned steps
are taken
the overwhelming majority of
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people
will
be persuaded
without even knowing it.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Talk about a place you like to go and why this place is special to you. Include details in your response. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
387 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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