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Talk about a character or trait of your personality What it is? From where did you get it? How it affects your life?

Talk about a character or trait of your personality What it is? From where did you get it? How it affects your life? bOQyP
Everybody in this world is different from each other’s, by natures, by looks and by behaviours etc. As we know we play many roles in our daily life and due to that we can see lots of ups and down in our behaviour. I'm really happy to share my principal of politeness, calmness and friendliness, these behaviours are some of my key features. I always worry that I will not hurt anyone's feelings by any mean. My calmness attitude always helped me to deal the worst situation in very positive manner. Whenever I dealt angrily with some situations, it’s went opposite to my expectation. I remember Me and my cousin had a fight and bad words at the age of fourteen and due to that my mom and my aunt had arguments with each other’s, Really our one wrong action created lots of mess between them. So from that days to till now I never handled situation with upset mind, I always more conscious about my action. I used my mind instead of my tongue. I always believe that think twice before speak. I'd like to give all credits to my grandfather from whom I got all these qualities, from my childhood I have been observed that he never had bad words or a single fight etc. with anyone, in our community people came to him to resolve their personal family matters. So, same like him I'm following this great good rules. I always believe that everybody need to adopt good behaviour instead of bad. Bad behaviour give pleasure feelings but it will be temporary, on the other hand good actions give you piece of mind, this is only possible if we all will believe that every tiny and major issues can be sorted out in with a polite and positive manner. I wish that people will live happily with these kind of positive approach.
Everybody in this world is
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different
from each other’s, by natures, by looks and by
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behaviours
etc. As we know we play
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many
roles in our daily life and due to that we can
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see
lots of ups and down in our
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behaviour
. I'm
really
happy to share my principal of politeness, calmness and friendliness, these
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behaviours
are
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some
of my key features. I always worry that I will not hurt anyone's feelings by any mean. My calmness attitude always
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helped
me to deal the worst situation in
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very
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positive
manner. Whenever I dealt
angrily
with
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some
situations, it’s went opposite to my expectation. I remember Me and my cousin had a fight and
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bad
words at the age of fourteen and due to that my mom and my aunt had arguments with each other’s,
Really
our one
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wrong
action created lots of mess between them.
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So
from that days to till
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now
I never handled situation with upset mind, I always more conscious about my action. I
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used
my mind
instead
of my tongue. I always believe that
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think
twice
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before
speak.
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I
'd like to give all credits to my grandfather from whom I
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got
all these qualities, from my childhood I have
been observed
that he never had
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bad
words or a single fight etc. with anyone, in our community
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people
came to him to resolve their personal family matters.
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So
, same like him I'm following this great
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good
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rules
.

I always believe that everybody need to adopt
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good
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behaviour
instead
of
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bad
.
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Bad
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behaviour
give pleasure feelings
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but
it will be temporary,
on the other hand
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good
actions give you piece of mind, this is
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only
possible if we all will believe that every tiny and major issues can
be sorted
out in with a polite and
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positive
manner. I wish that
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people
will
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live
happily
with
Did you mean "this kind" or "these kinds"?
these kind
of
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positive
approach.
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IELTS essay Talk about a character or trait of your personality What it is? From where did you get it? How it affects your life?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
315 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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