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Talk about a advertising negative or positive point

Talk about a advertising negative or positive point Doldj
Positive point of advertising Advertising is a essentials key of all modern business. all business using a advertising to run the business. I think we can't run business without advertising. we all know that we using more and more social media in daily life routine so all one know this think and companies more advertising put on the social so attract the customers and customers know about a new product. one think I can tell companies developing a product customers needs and wants. i think social media is a best tool to interact the customers on te product. Negative point of advertising The one think is more of negative about a advertising in the modern generation more of using social media and the children more of attract on advertisement such a stupid product this think can be main problem of all parents. beacuse the children see the adverting and want stubborn your parents.
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point of
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advertising Advertising
is
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a
essentials key of all modern
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business
.
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all
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business
using
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a
advertising to run the
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business
. I
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think
we can't run
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business
without advertising.
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we
all know that
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we using
more and more
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social
media in daily life routine
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so
all one know this
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think
and
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companies
more advertising put on the
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social
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so
attract the
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customers
and
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customers
know about a new
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product
.
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one
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think
I can
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tell
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companies
developing a
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product
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customers
needs and wants.
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i
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think
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social
media is
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a
best tool to interact the
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customers
on
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te
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product
.
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Negative
point of advertising The one
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think
is more of
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negative
about
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a
advertising in the modern generation more of using
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social
media and the children more of attract on advertisement such a stupid
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product
this
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think
can be main problem of all parents.
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beacuse
the children
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see
the adverting and want stubborn your parents.
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IELTS essay Talk about a advertising negative or positive point

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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