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Long Xuyen is the second place that I love, i am studying in Long Xuyen. There are many different things between my hometown and Long Xuyen. My hometown is An Phu, it is a peaceful place. The air is clean and good for health. Besides that, people are friendly and kind to each other. Next, the cost of living in the countryside is lower than that in Long Xuyen city. There are many food by themselves such as meat, eggs, vegetables, fishes and so on. The specialties of my hometown is Sac Boi (Ran) Dried Fish. In Long Xuyen city, because it is the city center, it is always crowded and bustling here. The infrastructure is modern and there are full of services for the people. More and more entertainment centers, commercial centers, hospitals and schools are built. At the end, if An Phu is my childhood, then Long Xuyen is my youth, and I love it!
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, the cost of living in the countryside is lower than that in
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on. The specialties of my hometown is Sac
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(Ran) Dried Fish. In
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city,
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it is the city center, it is always crowded and bustling here. The infrastructure is modern and there are full of services for the
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. More and more entertainment centers, commercial centers, hospitals and schools
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IELTS essay write about live in hometown and city

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
157 words
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