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Which is the proudest archievement in your life

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For me, the proudest achievement I got was when I was in 7th grade. At that time, the World Scholar Cup was an honor competition because of its large scale. And I'm so proud that my team got into the final round. If you don't know, WSC evaluates us in 4 different skills and 6 subjects. I have always been the best writer on the team, with a high ranking - yay. WSC and my team give me a lot of things. I first learned to debate, write an essay, and how to self-study effectively. Sometimes, we have conflicts (especially the boys: ") ) and I learned a lot that we need to try to understand others, understand their method of studying, and their opinion.

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