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Nowadays, all we can see the achievements of other people’s. We get curious about how they success and we search if they have a spesific way or something magical. We admire them and say “What a lucky man! ” Do you really think that it is just because of luck? When someone tries something which has never been tried until he does, we say “ I thought to do this before”. When they success, we say “Just a luck! ” Then who cares about the real reason? We often ignore it. It is giving hours to work. If someone is courageous and works 15-16 hours in a day, noone can give a reason to this success apart from studying harder. Consequently, We can not ignore other effects such as having support technically and economically, ability, capasity but trying something different, believing to do it and working are the most parts of success.

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