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The Fighter Who Was Born In The Gulf War

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Hard times produce challenges and emotional conflict which is grounded in your character. I was born in 1990 on November 9th in a small city called Albaha, which is in the south of the Kingdom Of Saudi Arabia. When I came out to this worldly life there were many wars around the world. The important war for my country was the war between Iraq and Kuwait. My country supported the Government of Kuwait and Kuwait citizens in this war as a result Our country has become an enemy of Iraq. During that fight, my parents thought I was a gift from God because the doctor told my mother she cannot get pregnant so for that reason my parents were happy, and they forgot everything about the world, wars, fear, insecurity, injustice, and death. They had a pleasant party, and they invited all of their friends. I was born in Tough situation. From that time, I learned the meaning of persevere and I will persevere until the last second in my life. I will fight to get what I want to achieve my ambitions to get my dreams to achieve my hopes. So, The hard condition contains all the qualities and features that make your personality different from other people, such as the ability to deal with difficult or dangerous situations and handle responsibility. You do not need to be born in war to be that person but you can make yourself as a piece of solid and face the hardships of your life. Written by: Abdullah Mesfer Alshamrani.

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 times produce challenges and emotional conflict which is grounded
 in your character. I was born
 in 1990 on November 9th in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
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Albaha
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When
 I came out to this worldly life there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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wars
 around the world. The This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
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war
 for my country was the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwarfarecombathostilityfightingstrifestrike
war
 between Iraq and Kuwait. My country supported the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 of Kuwait and Kuwait citizens in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwarfarecombathostilityfightingstrifestrike
war
as a result
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thought
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because
 the doctor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 my mother she cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 pregnant This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 for that reason my parents were happy, and they forgot everything about the world, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwarfarecombathostilityfightingstrifestrike
wars
, fear, insecurity, injustice, and death. They had a pleasant party, and they invited all of their friends. I was born
 in Tough situation. From that time, I learned the meaning of persevere and I will persevere until the last second in my life. I will fight to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 what I want to achieve my ambitions to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 my dreams to achieve my hopes. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 condition contains all the qualities and features that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 your personality This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 from other This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, such as the ability to deal with difficult or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 situations and handle responsibility. You do not need to be born
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make
 yourself as a piece of solid and face the hardships of your life.

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Alshamrani
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