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Answer the following question: How would society be different if TV had never been invented? Write at least 100 words.

Answer the following question: How would society be different if TV had never been invented? p1MYy
TV has always had an important role for every home since the day it was manufactured. TV has the function of transmitting images and videos, helping people to update news and entertainment. Today, TV has become more modern with a bigger screen, high-quality image and lively sound. Everyone in the house has at least one TV. It can be seen that everyone in the house has at least one TV. With quality speakers, sound and screen, the TV does a great job of entertaining as well as providing information. But what will happen if TV had never been invented? If TV had never been invented, we could not approach to news, and we would not know what is happening outside the world.
TV has always had an
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important
role for every home since the day it
was manufactured
. TV has the function of transmitting images and videos, helping
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people
to update news and entertainment.
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Today
, TV has become more modern with a bigger screen, high-quality image and lively sound. Everyone in the
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house
has at least one TV. It can be
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seen
that everyone in the
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house
has at least one TV. With quality speakers, sound and screen, the TV does a great job of entertaining
as well
as providing information.
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what will happen if TV had never
been invented
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, we could not approach to news, and we would not know what is happening outside the world.

IELTS essay Answer the following question: How would society be different if TV had never been invented?

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