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Take the dialogue about what is your the most beautiful experience?

Take the dialogue about what is your the most beautiful experience? GJnrQ
John: Have you ever been to Thailand? Mary: Yes, I have once John: How did it happen? Mary: Well, because I had a week off. So I decided to go to Thailand. John: When did it happen? Mary: In September a few years ago. John: Could you tell me why you chose Thailand to go to? Mary: Uhm, because I want to meet someone that I couldn't tell you concrete, but I could say that someone who gives me the most beautiful youth memories when I downcast or disappoited and other tough situations. So I want to meet them once in my life with my eyes. John: Great. I surely do that is the most beautiful experience you have ever had. Mary: Thank you.
John: Have you ever been to Thailand? Mary: Yes, I have once John: How did it happen? Mary: Well,
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because
I had a week off.
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So
I decided to go to Thailand. John: When did it happen? Mary: In September a few years ago. John: Could you
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tell
me why you chose Thailand to go to? Mary:
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Uhm
,
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because
I want to
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meet
someone that I couldn't
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tell
you concrete,
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but
I could say that someone who gives me the most
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beautiful
youth memories when I downcast or
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disappoited
and other tough situations.
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So
I want to
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meet
them once in my life with my eyes. John: Great. I
surely
do
that is
the most
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beautiful
experience you have ever had. Mary: Thank you.
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IELTS essay Take the dialogue about what is your the most beautiful experience?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
124 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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