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Should Thailand open the country next month

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Nowadays, the COVID-19 continues to spread in Thailand. Many people in the country have been affected by this pandemic. Not only that, but the situation is still serious around the world, and it is necessary to control people going out. In Thailand, the government has managed to deal with the virus but is unable to take care of all citizens. Covid19 in Thailand is affecting the economy, business and education. If the government opens the country, people in the country might be at risk from the virus. Therefore, the government should not open the country recently because many people in Thailand were not vaccinated and the virus is still spreading. Initially, people in Thailand are still not vaccinated. Therefore, Thailand should not reopen the country next month. The virus might spread significantly and the country may have to lock down again. For example, people did not get vaccines because they were concerned with the quality of vaccines provided by the government, making them fearful of getting vaccinated. Moreover, vaccines that the government imports to Thailand can’t protect against delta variants. Second, the virus continues to spread in the country. Because many people were not careful enough in the first outbreak, resulting in a continuous and rapid epidemic until now. Furthermore, certain viruses cause no symptoms in patients, which is another reason for the virus's rapid propagation. Although the government has measures to control the disease. Although the government has measures to control the disease, it still can't prevent infection within the country. For example, lockdowns in high-risk areas or curfews to set deadlines. The government's measures have affected many aspects of the country. Finally, the government’s open-door policy also has some advantages. For example, by opening the country, it can help the economy increase again. Countries around the world have been affected and many people have lost their jobs because of Covid-19, and they have nothing to do, only stay at home without a source of income. Besides, there are still many international relations, such as exchange students, and people who work in other countries can return to Thailand easier. In conclusion, for these reasons, against opening the country is the best choice in the current situation. As far as we know, the coronavirus is highly contagious, especially as it gets stronger and stronger over time. So, the government should implement an open policy when the epidemic was fully contained and people were vaccinated.
Nowadays, the COVID-19 continues to spread in Thailand.
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in the
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have been
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affected
by this pandemic. Not
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only
that,
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the situation is
still
serious around the world, and it is necessary to control
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people
going out. In Thailand, the
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government
has managed to deal with the
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virus
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but
is unable to take care of all citizens.
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in Thailand is affecting the economy, business and education. If the
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government
opens the
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country
,
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people
in the
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might be at
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risk
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.
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, the
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government
should not open the
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country
recently
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because
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many
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people
in Thailand were not vaccinated and the
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virus
is
still
spreading.

Initially
,
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people
in Thailand are
still
not vaccinated.
Therefore
, Thailand should not reopen the
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country
next
month. The
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virus
might spread
significantly
and the
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country
may
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have to
lock down again.
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,
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people
did not
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get
vaccines
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because
they
were concerned
with the quality of vaccines provided by the
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government
, making them fearful of getting vaccinated.
Moreover
, vaccines that the
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government
imports to Thailand can’t protect against delta variants.

Second, the
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virus
continues to spread in the
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country
.
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Because
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many
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people
were not careful
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in the
first
outbreak, resulting in a continuous and rapid epidemic until
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now
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Furthermore
, certain viruses cause no symptoms in patients, which is another reason for the virus's rapid propagation.
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Although
the
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government
has measures to control the disease. Although the
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has measures to control the disease, it
still
can't
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prevent
infection within the
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country
.
For example
, lockdowns in high-
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risk
areas or curfews to set deadlines. The
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government
's measures have
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affected
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aspects of the country.

Finally
, the
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government’s
open-door policy
also
has
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some
advantages.
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, by opening the
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country
, it can
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help
the economy increase again.
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Countries
around the world have been
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affected
and
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people
have lost their jobs
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because
of Covid-19, and they have nothing to do,
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only
stay at home without a source of income.
Besides
, there are
still
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many
international relations, such as exchange students, and
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people
who work in other
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countries
can return to Thailand easier.

In conclusion
, for these reasons, against opening the
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country
is the best choice in the
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current
situation. As far as we know, the coronavirus is
highly
contagious,
especially
as it
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gets
stronger and stronger over time.
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So
, the
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government
should implement an open policy when the epidemic was
fully
contained and
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people
were vaccinated
.
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IELTS essay Should Thailand open the country next month

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6.5
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