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Taekwondo is being practiced in more than 190 countries by over 30 million people.

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Taekwondo is being practiced in more than 190 countries by over 30 million people. It is a martial art, which includes using the body. It involves not just physical ability, but the training of mind and body altogether. Martial arts that are included in taekwondo come from Korea. It also has Japanese Karate movements, as well as Kung-Fu kicks, Chinese activities and Judo. It was known in 1955 and taught abroad in the 1960s. In 2000, it was considered part of the Olympics.
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being practiced
in more than 190 countries by over 30 million
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It is a martial art, which includes using the body. It involves not
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from Korea. It
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IELTS essay Taekwondo is being practiced in more than 190 countries by over 30 million people.

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