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A gap year good or bad idea

A gap year good or bad idea 8L8bk

To be a productive person it is something that is always listen. But it is very important ask yourself if it is really neccesary convince others? , follow others just beacause it is everyone does? . Ask these kind of questions is very important beacuse you can only model your own destiny. This essay will be focus on: * Posses your own destiny *To think to grow *Others influences affect your own perception Posses your destinity is not to easy as it sounds, it is something deeper than that. Remeber that the only person able to change the story of your book it is yourself so do not let anyone eslse be the main author in that book. Taking into account that you have to know who you are and what you want to achieve in this life. Then you need to think if following others makes you feel happy and satified or just satisfy people. Because many students from last semesters from highschool think that if you are taking a rest time to think or gap year it would wast valuable time. It would delayed you. Because when we are young it is very easy be influenced by others. That's why I say that you have to live in the moment you are. If you want to take gap year to clarify or get experience it is best choice you can choose. I was in that situation some years ago, that is why I study English and decided to become a teacher. So as a conclusion I could say live as you want, choose the most risks as you think it's propperly to get experiences and learn from that.

To be a productive person it is something that is
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listen
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But
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very
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important
 ask yourself if it is really
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neccesary
 convince others? Loose punctuation mark.apply
,
 follow others This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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beacause
 it is everyone does? Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 Ask Did you mean "this kind" or "these kinds"?this kindthese kinds
these kind
 of questions is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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important
Possible spelling mistake found.because
beacuse
 you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 model your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 destiny.

This essay will be focus on:

* Posses your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 destiny

*To You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 to grow

*Others influences affect your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 perception

Posses your Possible spelling mistake found.destinydestiniesfestivitydestining
destinity
 is not Did you mean "too"?too
to
 easy as it sounds, it is something deeper than that. Possible spelling mistake found.Remember
Remeber
 that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 person able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the story of your book it is yourself This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 anyone Possible spelling mistake found.else
eslse
 be the main author in that book. Taking into account that you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 know who you are and what you want to achieve in this life.

Then you need to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 if following others This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 you feel happy and Possible spelling mistake found.satisfiedratified
satified
 or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 satisfy This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 students from last semesters from Possible spelling mistake found.high school
highschool
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 that if you are taking a rest time to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 or gap year it would wast valuable time. It would The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: "delay"delay
delayed
 you.

“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 when we are young it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 easy be influenced
 by others. That's why I say that you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
Did you mean "at the moment" (=currently)?at the moment
in the moment
 you are. If you want to take gap year to clarify or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 experience it A determiner is probably missing here: "is the best".is the best
is best
 choice you can choose.

I was in that situation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 years ago, that is
 why I study English and decided to become a teacher.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 as a conclusion I could say This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 as you want, choose the most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardsdangers
risks
 as you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 it's Possible spelling mistake found.properly
propperly
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 experiences and learn from that. 