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In the writing section, I faced a lot of challenges due to the fact It was hard to me cover the target time, overall, I consider the time to think and write properly to phrase my ideas. I am used to doing these types of tasks in which the instructors ask me to explain and give my point of view based on a situation given. The vocabulary is another important point to improve, in the first task they gave me a topic that I consider unfamiliar, charity is not a famous activity in Mexico, that could be an extern fact for this academic test. The second task was an essay, and it was easy to write but difficult to complete, sincerely school was always a frequent topic to talk about. The linking words I used were the most common connectors, I tend to use the same words to name something so I realize I must amplify my knowledge to create a text with a relevant variety of words. Anyway, I think that I explained the ideas clearly, following the structure they suggested to me, I take into account the main idea, I defend my position and add some examples, I think that the context could be another positive factor because I felt more comfortable doing the exam in my home, with my computer, and in my own space, if I were asked to take the exam in a classroom, I would probably feel nervous and failed. Honestly, I agree with the score band I obtained; I know that I must improve in the aspects mentioned before. I think I can get a better result if I continue working on my weaknesses, I would like to keep practicing or maybe to take a course to get ready and turn into a teacher who has extensive knowledge of English. In the writing section, I faced a lot of challenges due to the fact It was hard to me cover the delimited time I had to write, although this fact I consider the time to think and write properly to phrase my ideas. I am used to doing these types of tasks in which the instructors ask me to explain and give my point of view based on a situation given. The vocabulary is another important point, in the first task they gave me a topic that I consider unfamiliar, charity is not a famous activity in Mexico, that could be an extern fact. The second task was easy to write but difficult to complete, sincerely I have already write essays with the same situation
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properly
to phrase my
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ideas
. I am
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explain
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point
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The vocabulary is another
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point
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they gave me a topic that I
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consider
unfamiliar, charity is not a
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famous
activity in Mexico, that could be an
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extern
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fact
for this academic
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test
. The second
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was an essay, and it was easy to
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but
difficult to complete,
sincerely
school was always a frequent topic to talk about.

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linking words I
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were the most common connectors, I tend to
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use
the same words to name something
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I realize I
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amplify my knowledge to create a text with a relevant variety of words. Anyway, I
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think
that I
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explained
the
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ideas
clearly
, following the structure they suggested to me, I take into account the main
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idea
, I defend my position and
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add
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some
examples, I
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that the context could be another
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factor
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space, if I
were asked
to take the exam in a classroom, I would
probably
feel nervous and failed.

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agree
with the score band I obtained; I know that I
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must
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improve
in the aspects mentioned
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I can
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get
a better result if I continue working on my weaknesses, I would like to
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keep
practicing or maybe to take a course to
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get
ready and turn into a teacher who has extensive knowledge of English. In the writing section, I faced
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a lot of
challenges due to the
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fact
It was
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hard
to me cover the delimited
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time
I had to
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write
, although this
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fact
I
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consider
the
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time
to
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think
and
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write
properly
to phrase my
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ideas
. I am
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used
to doing these types of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tasks
in which the instructors ask me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
and give my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
point
of view based on a situation
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
.

The vocabulary is another
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important
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point
, in the
first
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task
they gave me a topic that I
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consider
unfamiliar, charity is not a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
activity in Mexico, that could be an
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extern
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fact
. The second
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task
was easy to
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write
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but
difficult to complete,
sincerely
I have already
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essays with the same
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IELTS essay The writing section is better

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
431 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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