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The given illustration demonstrates the decision of analysis which coffee and tea buying and drinking modes between five different metropolises of Australian.

The given illustration demonstrates the decision of analysis which coffee and tea buying and drinking modes between five different metropolises of Australian. AgDyM

Overall, the percentage of city citizens who paid for instant coffee and went to a café for coffee and tea in the last 4 week have been rising in five Australian places. On the contrary, the number of dwellers purchased fresh coffee were the lowest than other coffee and tea’ statistics in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide. First of the most high statistics, in Sydney, Melbourne, Hobart, the proportion of natives acquired fresh coffee in last 4 week accounted for almost 61%, 64% and 63%, respectively. However, number have fallen around 64 per cent in Brisbane. Second, there was steady growth in proportion of buying instant coffee of city residents. Though number were lower compared to buy instant coffee. The figure of instant coffee just over 45% in Sydney. Whilst, number have fallen at 50% in Adelaide. While, there was rapid fall in the percentage of buying fresh coffee of countries tenant. However, in Sydney, Melbourne, the amount were high for approximately 44%, 43%, respectively. But results have dropped about similar’ number than 35% in Brisbane and Adelaide.

Overall
, the percentage of city citizens who paid for instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
 and went to a café for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
 and tea in the last 4 week have been rising in five Australian places. On the contrary
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of dwellers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
 were the Use "lower" to make a comparison with this adjective.lower
lowest
 than other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
 and tea’ statistics in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide.

First
 of This adjective uses the short comparatives form.highest
the most high
 statistics, in Sydney, Melbourne, Hobart, the proportion of natives acquired fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
 in last 4 week accounted for almost 61%, 64% and 63%, respectively
. However
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 have fallen around 64 per cent in Brisbane.

Second, there was steady growth in proportion of buying instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
 of city residents. “Though” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Though
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 were lower compared to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
. The figure of instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over 45% in Sydney. Whilst, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 have fallen at 50% in Adelaide.

“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
, there was rapid fall in the percentage of buying fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
 of countries tenant. However
, in Sydney, Melbourne, the amount were high for approximately 44%, 43%, respectively
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 results have dropped about similar’ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 than 35% in Brisbane and Adelaide. 