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Do you think is a good idea taking a gap time before starting the university?

Do you think is a good idea taking a gap time before starting the university? br98g
Nowdays, most of the students decide to take a sometime to continue studing the university, in the other hand some students prefer to start their in the same year as finishing the college or the school grade. In a personal oponion, I prefer to take a year out until I start the new career or start the university, as long as this time will improve something positve for me, maybe taking some experience from a job or an activity related with what I am going to study. This idea will be discussed later on the following essay.
Nowdays
, most of the students decide to take a sometime to continue
studing
the university, in the other hand
some
students prefer to
start
their in the same year as finishing the college or the school grade. In a personal
oponion
, I prefer to take a year out until I
start
the new career or
start
the university, as long as this time will
improve
something
positve
for me, maybe taking
some
experience from a job or an activity related with what I am going to study. This
idea
will
be discussed
later on the following essay.
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IELTS essay Do you think is a good idea taking a gap time before starting the university?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
97 words
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