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t is probably true to say that cyberspace and social networking has become integral part of our life.However, lots of kids are in hazardous circumstances due to overuse of the net.some people suggest that fully fledged people have to restrict the wireless networking for their little ones.I personally believe that it should be important to border the hyperspace in order to save our child.I shall put forth my arguments to support my view. the primary reason why it is essential to restrict the world wide web is that when youngsters are playing online games they accept all terms and conditions without reading at all in this way hackers spy an important documents and use it in illigal way which can lead major trouble. Beside this, it would not only spy official data but also encourage kids to do crime which could leading them to attempt suicide.various studies conducted in the uk shown that each year 50000 immature children are arrive in truble and 3000 students lost their lives du

t is probably true to say that cyberspace and social networking has become integral part of our life. However, lots of kids are in hazardous circumstances due to overuse of the net. some people suggest that fully fledged people have to restrict the wireless networking for their little ones. I personally believe that it should be important to border the hyperspace in order to save our child. I shall put forth my arguments to support my view. the primary reason why it is essential to restrict the world wide web is that when youngsters are playing online games they accept all terms and conditions without reading at all in this way hackers spy an important documents and use it in illigal way which can lead major trouble. Beside this, it would not only spy official data but also encourage kids to do crime which could leading them to attempt suicide. various studies conducted in the uk shown that each year 50000 immature children are arrive in truble and 3000 students lost their lives du OMEMp

it is probably true to say that cyberspace and social networking has become integral part of our life. However, lots of kids are in hazardous circumstances due to overuse of the net. some people suggest that fully fledged people have to restrict the wireless networking for their little ones. I personally believe that it should be important to border the hyperspace in order to save our child. I shall put forth my arguments to support my view. the primary reason why it is essential to restrict the world wide web is that when youngsters are playing online games they accept all terms and conditions without reading at all in this way hackers spy an important documents and use it in illigal way which can lead major trouble. Beside this, it would not only spy official data but also encourage kids to do crime which could leading them to attempt suicide. various studies conducted in the uk shown that each year 50000 immature children are arrive in truble and 3000 students lost their lives due to abuse of the internet. secondly, exrtremely use of the web and social media platforms spoil toddlers education career. what i mean by this is that when kids spend their precious time front of screen in order to chatting with friends, going live via social media, which could have negative impact on thier studies and consequently put them in a truble. therefore, a strong parental supervision is needed to those children who have easy access to the net. In conclusion, children landed in risky situation due to abuse of the networking sites and social activities online. i think that adult supervision is important to evade undesirable effects of the net on youngsers

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