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A4osf of our infotmdlion comes from lhe lnternel nowctdoys. Some peopre soy thot o lotge polrt of lhe informolion we gel is incorrecf. Do you ogrce or disogree? Give yout opinion.

A4osf of our infotmdlion comes from lhe lnternel nowctdoys. Some peopre soy thot o lotge polrt of lhe informolion we gel is incorrecf. Do you ogrce or disogree? Give yout opinion. KnYnN
Nowadays, due to technological enhancement, a number of devices are available. A lot of people think that most of data comes from the internet are incorrect. The essay discusses about statement. To begin with, people who believes that information from internet is incorrect because nowadays, numerous data are able on the internet and many people have knowledge how to add incorrect information about many things such as about politics, well-known person, sports, education, environment, and various things which are available. Apart from this, lots of people using fake identity to remove the correct data from the internet. Moreover, people used to do too much work on the internet everyday and for that, they have to get information and due to fake identity, people are not able to receive useful data from internet which is not good for them. On the flip side, many people think that it is not true because in the internet, thousands of information available from which, people cannot only able to gain their intelligence but also access some information which are helpful for them to complete their day-to-day work. Moreover, from internet, people can receive various form of data such as in image, videos, audio, animation, text and many more formats which are very good for them to finish their many tasks. To put it in a nutshell, I totally agree with the people who believes that information from internet is incorrect because people have idea how to change the correct data from the internet and leak the identity of the person.
Nowadays, due to technological enhancement, a number of devices are available.
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people
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think
that most of
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data
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comes
from the internet are
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incorrect
. The essay
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discusses about statement
.

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people
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believes
that
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information
from internet is
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incorrect
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because
nowadays, numerous
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data
are able on the internet and
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many
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people
have knowledge how to
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add
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incorrect
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information
about
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many
things such as about politics, well-known person, sports, education, environment, and various things which are available. Apart from this, lots of
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people
using fake identity to remove the correct
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data
from the internet.
Moreover
,
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people
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used
to do too much work on the internet
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everyday
and for that, they
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have to
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get
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information
and due to fake identity,
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people
are not able to receive useful
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data
from internet which is not
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good
for them.

On the flip side,
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many
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people
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think
that it is not true
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because
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in the internet
, thousands of
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information
available from which,
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people
cannot
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only
able to gain their intelligence
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but
also
access
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some
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information
which are helpful for them to complete their day-to-day work.
Moreover
, from internet,
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people
can receive various form of
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data
such as in image, videos, audio, animation, text and
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many
more formats which are
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very
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good
for them to finish their
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many
tasks.

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totally
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agree
with the
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people
who
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believes
that
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information
from internet is
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incorrect
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because
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people
have
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idea
how to
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change
the correct
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data
from the internet and leak the identity of the person.
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IELTS essay A4osf of our infotmdlion comes from lhe lnternel nowctdoys. Some peopre soy thot o lotge polrt of lhe informolion we gel is incorrecf. Do you ogrce or disogree? Give yout opinion.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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