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T is a boy or 3333 girl who is a boy or a girl in the beginning of the her should have to the a money a the a a the previous sea previous sea was which was the British

T is a boy or 3333 girl who is a boy or a girl in the beginning of the her should have to the a money a the a a the previous sea previous sea was which was the British Nlo7b
ln some countries the ownership of peoples’ home is an important matter. In these countries it is very important 40 own your own home rather than renting it. Н might be indifferent for some, but for these. people it matter. Why is that the case? you might wonder. I think it is because your home is supposed to be exactly what it sounds like, your home. As a human I think we long after having stuff to call our own, doesn't matter what it is, but humans will always want to claim ownership. This is nothing new and it hhas been like this through human history, like colonies for example, which later once again became the same country as before lead by its own inhabitants. People will always want to be the one to decide what happens to them and when you rent your home. you can't even paint it without the owners permission. If you as a person are renting an apartment there might be a lot of stressors in your life. A scratched wall can cause you a major headache, because the wall was not yours. The bedroom you are currently sleeping in might not be available as long as you hope, things happen in life. and maybe the next landlord won't want to have you as a tenant. In other perspective, not owning your home could be a relief when it comes to your finance. AS a renter you won't have to pay mortgage, take loans or spend an awful lot of money on buying the property. You wouldn't have to worry about the house market crashing or a natural disaster destroying your expensive home. Bottom line, as a human I feel like we need to have a home and calling it your own can make that more special, I personally would rather own my house, because: then whatever happens it is on me and no one else.
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history, like colonies
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market crashing or a natural disaster destroying your expensive home.

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I feel like we need to have a home and calling it your
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: then whatever happens it is on me and no one else.

IELTS essay T is a boy or 3333 girl who is a boy or a girl in the beginning of the her should have to the a money a the a a the previous sea previous sea was which was the British

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
321 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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