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nowadays person’s worth honorable

nowadays person’s worth honorable eEoyG

Let’s start with the fact that I disagree with statement «nowadays person’s worth». Just because this characteristic was always existed. From the Middle Ages to beginning of 20th century one and only thing that could make a person safe - their social status and material possessions. And now I am silent about fact that at those ages one didn’t exist without the other. You could be regarded only if you had an «honorable» origin. You could be well-off just because of this. After all, in order to feel secured, you had to come from a rich or high-status family. Moreover, if you were a girl in those days, no matter what characteristics you possessed, you were judged only by your father or husband status. You couldn't move up the career ladder as a men in army. You couldn't earn a honorable status by yourself. You could only marry a well-off man. And even in order to get married, it was not enough to have such values. You had to be, first of all, beautiful, and secondly, able to bring a son, not daughter. Unfortunately, only in romantic books of those ages we can observe a love story about two young ones, who falling in love one due to their moral values, like kindness, sincerity etc. But enough about the bad. Nowadays, in the 21st century, with the development of equality and transparency (thanks to the internet), we can realise, that in human relations revolution happened. Sincerity, purposefulness, empathy, erudition, friendliness, etc now valued. If I have to explain my own experience than look: on my life path my material possessions was important only for mercantile people, who would like to become the part of my social status. Personally for me, this assessment of people is unacceptable. In conclusion, I can say that I can agree with this topic only in one case - this is true, if we talk about mercantile people.

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Let
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start
 with the fact that I disagree with statement «nowadays person’s worth». This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
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because
 this characteristic was always existed. From the Middle Ages to beginning of 20th century one and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalone
only
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make
 a person safe Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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 their social You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdignityprominenceplacestaturepositionprestige
status
 and material possessions. And This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I am silent about fact that at those ages one didn’t exist without the other.

You could be regarded
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only
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just
because of this
. After all
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come
 from a rich or high-status family. Moreover
, if you were a girl in those days, no matter what characteristics you possessed, you were judged
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move
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men
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And even in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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enough
 to have such values. You had to be, This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".first
first of all
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
, and secondly
, able to bring a son, not daughter.

Unfortunately, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalone
only
 in romantic books of those ages we can observe a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 story about two young ones, who falling in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 one due to their moral values, like kindness, sincerity etc.

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But
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enough
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bad
. Nowadays, in the 21st century, with the development of equality and transparency (thanks to the internet), we can Possible spelling mistake. 'realise' is British English.realize
realise
, that in human relations revolution happened. Sincerity, purposefulness, empathy, erudition, friendliness, etc This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 valued.

If I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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explain
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 experience than look: on my life path my material possessions was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
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only
 for mercantile This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, who would like to become the part of my social You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdignityprominenceplacestaturepositionprestige
status
. Personally
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people
 is unacceptable.

In conclusion
, I can say that I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this topic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalone
only
 in one case Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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 this is true, if we talk about mercantile This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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